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Wait for You (Wait for You, #1)

Wait for You (Wait for You, #1) - J. Lynn

I really, really liked this book. First I need to say that it is startlingly similar to The Coincidence of Callie and Kayden, which I loved.

*Cam made this book. He was adorable. The kind of guy every girl would want.

 

*The dialogue was excellent. Well written, witty, and believable. I love a lot of dialogue and not so much narration and this was perfect.

 

* I loved how they didn't fall in love at first sight. There was a nice pace to building their relationship.

 

* The secondary characters were well done. Everyones personality shone. (that's such a weird word)

 

I knocked a star off for a couple of reasons.

 

*I think Avery held her secret way too long. It frustrated me.

 

*Editing issues. I am SO sick of typos, incorrect words, missing words, extra words and messed up sentences! Are the new generation of editors uneducated? Lazy? I don't get it! Older books did not have these blaring problems. And YES JLA DID use an editor.

 

Still...Great book from a talented author.